Very impressive. The interjections throughout the story that define who and what Yuuto is was a nice touch. And I felt you were dead on with several of your statements, particularly "He was humanity's detachment from itself." I felt that simple sentence said so much about Yuuto's character. You have a nice way of taking something abstract and giving it form, putting it into words that make the reader wonder why they never thought of it that way before.
Wonderful interpretation of a character that gets so little love from the fandom. Good job. ;)
